this is a very cute comic. and truthfully this is me through all the pages. refresh. refresh. refresh. update. refresh... and then this... its starting to break my heart. upsate as soon as you can!~
thanks a lot for the comment!
I'm very glad you did liked it!
i'm so sorry for no uptade more!
it is because i need wait my friend translate!
my english is horrible!
and I will do my best to not to disappoint along the story!
thanks a lot again :)
This has a fun wispy quality. If you genuinely want to perfect the English I couldn't help you in that regard as I was a visual media major, not a writing specialist, in college.
However, there was a bit of a mental hiccup on page seven (11? quite the cowinkydink) in the fifth pannel that might have been overlooked if I was speeding through the text.
It's possible there is a word missing. Still, I wouldn't hold it against you if even if English wasn't your second language, because we all make mistakes. Especially when there's something in the area of thirty words in the balloon.
I, myself, recently made the mistake of missing an "if" and a "the" when I wrote out a paragraph earlier this week. Sadly, I was unable to edit the mistake as I am clearly the victim of the occasional Titivillus possession.
@GabrielsThoughts: hey, thanks for help!
i will fix it soon as i can! :D
thanks a lot