Unusual - Comics - volume 1- chapter 3 - page 08
don't worry, there's not much wrong ^^
(and if I hadn't read it again, I wouldn't even have noticed XD)
I hope you don't mind me correcting it =D
in panel 2: "...like you've seen a ghost..." / "...was he trying to sell..."
in panel 3: Speech bubble 2: "He" would be better here, I think XD / better say "hang up" instead of "hang off"
last panel: he really pisses me of / "what's up with that face" instead of "this face"
I think they're just minor mistakes. and like I said, I wouldn't have noticed XDD
Posted @ December 19th, 2012, 3:53 pm
Mind? I am extremely grateful!
You really help a lot!
I'm soooo glad! thanks thanks thanks!
i fixed it!
and if you find something wrong and if you can please let me know.
you really help me! :D
Posted @ December 19th, 2012, 7:18 pm