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Unusual - Comics - volume 1- chapter 6 - page 05


Comentário da Dona Maricotinha:
crazybela, July 20th, 2013, 1:42 pm ( Reply )

thanks for read!
i hope that i can update more soon!

Advertisement, July 21st, 2018, 12:27 pm ( Reply )


Dark magic spell!! xDDDDD

Posted @ July 20th, 2013, 6:41 pm

Haha! That is so funny! Muttering with huge blush and he can't hear a word of it! XD

More grammatical suggestions:
Panel 1: It could be 'If I find him alone before the show I'll apologize!' or 'If I find him alone before the show I'll give him an apology!' For the unfinished text under the bubble is it supposed to be 'That is so unli-' As in 'That is so unlike me' ?
Panel 2: I think it would read more naturally as 'I wasn't serious!' or 'I wasn't actually serious!'
Panel 4: 'Failed at trying to leave without being noticed' or 'Fail at leaving without being noticed'
Panel 5: 'To be honest, there's a little blue here and there, but it's unlikely someone would notice it!'
Panel 6: 'Sorry... I... didn't understand a single world of what you've said!' or 'Sorry... I... didn't understand a single world that you've said!'
I think it would sound more natural if he said 'can you repeat that?' instead of 'can you repeat?'

I love this page so hard! It's so cute! :3

Posted @ July 22nd, 2013, 7:24 pm

For grammar, it should be "word", not "world" in Panel 6. Just so you know.

Posted @ July 25th, 2013, 4:55 pm

You are soooo awesome! thanks for help!
reaaaally! <3
And, in the first panel, seems like it is unlikely (i even dont know because a friend translated to me).
but i put improbable.
and thanks again! =D \o/

Posted @ July 27th, 2013, 9:39 pm

@Scarce Rose: ahaha yep xD

Posted @ July 27th, 2013, 9:39 pm

@DaughterofBastet: you are right!
thanks a lot :D

Posted @ July 27th, 2013, 9:39 pm

thank you I'm glad! Yeah using improbable makes it easier to understand whats being cut off. And sorry about writing 'world' instead of 'word' haha >.<

Posted @ July 28th, 2013, 8:57 pm

@callirain: haha no problem

Posted @ August 6th, 2013, 7:46 pm

pffffffft!!! okay this is just adorable xD

Posted @ August 7th, 2013, 6:52 am