Ohoh Daniel pulling shoujo manga phrases on her? I like this new plot twist for the show. Jaque is definitely going to be the easiest to pick out.
Oh more grammatical suggestions ;)
Panel 1: 'I don't understand anything you've said' using nothing makes it a double negative
Panel 5: 'pass the next stage which will be' instead of 'who will be'
@callirain: Daniel is good in shoujo phrases hehehee
and THANKS A LOT FOR ALL HELP /o/