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Unusual - Comics - volume 1- chapter 6 - page 07


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crazybela, July 27th, 2013, 10:00 pm ( Reply )

thnaks for read!
a nice post

Advertisement, July 21st, 2018, 12:40 pm ( Reply )



Would you mind if I noted some grammatical errors on this page and the one before?

Posted @ July 28th, 2013, 12:01 am

I sense that no matter what she does, she's not going to be kicked off and it's obvious that he likes her a LOT if he's kept her on the show this entire time! Funnier note on this, she's even more obvious about how tsundere she is about him as well as her feelings.

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Can't WAIT to see how this'll end up even more than before!!! xD

Posted @ July 28th, 2013, 2:31 am

new reader. this series is adorable! an they are both such sweethearts!

Posted @ July 28th, 2013, 3:49 am

Wow they are not making it easy for him! Is it a conspiracy by the announcer to get her kicked off? And what is she planning... haha I agree with Andromeda L. though I have a feeling its going to totally fail somehow XD

grammatical suggestions:
Panel 1: the only thing you have to correct is that random 'e' between 'covered' and 'and' and change 'your' to 'their'
though it would be a little more concise if you said something like 'masked, covered, and their voices modified so they can only be identified by their personalities!'
Panel 2: I don't know what the 'fantasy number' means has it been mentioned before and I forgot?
Panel 3: 'them' instead of 'they'

Posted @ July 28th, 2013, 9:16 pm

@Aysan1: I dont mind! Please, help me! i will be glad =D

Posted @ August 6th, 2013, 7:37 pm

@Andromeda Lazuli: hahaha
totally true! ;D

Posted @ August 6th, 2013, 7:39 pm

@Cantstopcrazy: yay! o/ thaaanks! *U*

Posted @ August 6th, 2013, 7:39 pm

hahaha not a conspiracy, but he really wanna to get her kicked off!

THAAAAAAAAAANKS FOR HELP! *u* You are so nice!
in the panel 2 = well the number is in the fantasy! i try right again. I hope that is better.

Posted @ August 6th, 2013, 7:45 pm